"The hardest thing in the world is loving someone who used to love you"..
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE
Regrets
by RDMP
Whenever I hear his melodious name,
there's a certain voice in my head that seems to drive me insane.
Then memories from the past came like a rain,
it drowned my heart and left me in pain..
Then one day I saw him beside the lane,
together with his friends waiting for the train.
I think he felt the weight of my stare,
so i tried to look the other way but to late he caught me but seem not to care.
Then the key of sadness had opened its door,
i uttered "that guy used to loved me before".
How funny that now its him I adore,
I should stop thinking about him before my eyes get sored.
But then my heart cant stop remembering,
it keeps on dictating what my mind is denying.
Then my heart is filled with damn regrets,
from all this pain how can I forget?
Regrets
by RDMP
Whenever I hear his melodious name,
there's a certain voice in my head that seems to drive me insane.
Then memories from the past came like a rain,
it drowned my heart and left me in pain..
Then one day I saw him beside the lane,
together with his friends waiting for the train.
I think he felt the weight of my stare,
so i tried to look the other way but to late he caught me but seem not to care.
Then the key of sadness had opened its door,
i uttered "that guy used to loved me before".
How funny that now its him I adore,
I should stop thinking about him before my eyes get sored.
But then my heart cant stop remembering,
it keeps on dictating what my mind is denying.
Then my heart is filled with damn regrets,
from all this pain how can I forget?
Boy and Girl
by RDMP
She is living in a world of lies,
That’s why at night secretly she cries
. I don’t know what’s going on her mind,
What is it that made her blind?
He’s the kind of guy who is cool,
That’s why girls out there are fooled.
But his world suddenly collide,
What’s that something he’s trying to hide?
She thought what others said was right,
That loving him is definitely not right.
And now she’s dreaming of holding him tight,
But how could it happen if he’s now out of sight?
He knew it was love that he feels,
For that was the first time he felt that real.
But a scar in his heart was made,
When he got hurt ‘coz of the love he laid.
How she wished she followed her heart,
So that she will not hurt the man that she love.
And now it’s too late to correct what she had done,
For she think the guy’s love is finally gone.
Does his love for the girl truly fade?
Or maybe just trying to escape the feeling ‘coz there’s no aid?
When he’s asked about the girl he got nothing to say,
Do you still love her or your feelings went away?
by RDMP
She is living in a world of lies,
That’s why at night secretly she cries
. I don’t know what’s going on her mind,
What is it that made her blind?
He’s the kind of guy who is cool,
That’s why girls out there are fooled.
But his world suddenly collide,
What’s that something he’s trying to hide?
She thought what others said was right,
That loving him is definitely not right.
And now she’s dreaming of holding him tight,
But how could it happen if he’s now out of sight?
He knew it was love that he feels,
For that was the first time he felt that real.
But a scar in his heart was made,
When he got hurt ‘coz of the love he laid.
How she wished she followed her heart,
So that she will not hurt the man that she love.
And now it’s too late to correct what she had done,
For she think the guy’s love is finally gone.
Does his love for the girl truly fade?
Or maybe just trying to escape the feeling ‘coz there’s no aid?
When he’s asked about the girl he got nothing to say,
Do you still love her or your feelings went away?
I wrote this poems last year.Its already posted in my FS account and I decided to put it here.. Wala lang,trip lang. What can u say about it?? Feel free to comment..Thanks.. :)
very good. =)
ReplyDeletei think that poem is a bit shallow. Too much rhyming that you cant focus on what you really are trying to imply. Its like when i say "love", next sentence would be "above". Dont take it bad,its just an opinion for a bit of improvement.
ReplyDeleteits ok, but ngaun ko lng 2 nabasa?
ReplyDeletehehe anyway whoever u are sana nagpakilala ka..
thanks anyway.. :)